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*Blue*
11-20-2006, 12:13 PM
Never ending words, never lasting love, never be here waiting you to be near
It’s a long story talking about that glory obscured with love and pain
Once upon time there was me and u were mine I remember that day but now it's so far
Holding those passions waiting so anxious, fighting those illusions feared the dark
The pain grew stronger the night slipped with that hunger
It's the darkness, turning my life seasons to shade, wondering soul waiting for integrity
Standing there watching your traces I tried to follow before it's too late
Just like magic it's all avoiding left me in this journey like ancient ruins
That was my story once upon time there were you but no longer mine …

Dr Eep
11-22-2006, 07:04 AM
Blue wrote;
"Never ending words, never lasting love,"

Nice - sounds like a truism that should always have been there!!:)

summer grace
12-12-2006, 06:35 PM
I love it! It is really makes you feel the mood. You should continue writing poems. I try, but I can never catch the mood of things like you do in such beautiful words.