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pickle755
01-05-2004, 08:03 PM
'Negotiating with Hell'

As I touch the mirror, blood drips onto the floor
My mind is filling up, I make my way to the door.
He pulls me back and I fly with him into the dark cold night.
We share stillness but no shadows
His eyes reflect nothing but glass
The stars daze our thoughts and he takes me into death.
Faces of silent screaming,
no pictures but cardboard cuts.
Metal surrounds his heart
As I touch the thorns, I see traces of blood and blackness
as I pass through the looking glass.
Never to return, I kill it.
Melting him I cease to exist and disappear into the bliss.

tell me what yall think.. thanks

SmilesAF
01-12-2004, 12:53 PM
A bit sinister, got some nice sounding lines in it.