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Omniscient One
11-13-2006, 09:28 PM
This is the first poem i ever attempted and i found it while browsing my myspace blog. :lol:

Yes, Sir!

The thunderous winds take my ears

The pavement takes my feet

The sun rapes me of my color

The cold eats at my skin



A simple walk with a valiant resolution they all have said

Rules for a silly game they all have played

A broken child in a coffin nailed shut

Flowers for a happy mother left, deaf, blind, and dumb



I wear far too many masks my good sir

I speak quite too many words my dear friend

I shout at the top of my lungs just for kicks

I cry, for I fear blood will soon be my release



I kill time 3 minutes a year, and by that, it is far too little

I warrant truth from my eyes, although daily I am deceived

I rip the memories from my mind, the vile stains released

I welcome your input, creator, for now is a good time as ever



Do I pray? Yes, sir! I tell my faith

Do I love? Yes, sir! I whisper to my lover

Do I sin? Yes, sir! I shout at the heavens

Do I live? Yes, sir! I pull the trigger



The red future to brown escapes me

The white now covered in life

The cold metal still at my hand

The man still looking down

Dr Eep
11-15-2006, 01:46 AM
Omniscient one wrote;
Do I pray? Yes, sir! I tell my faith

Do I love? Yes, sir! I whisper to my lover

Do I sin? Yes, sir! I shout at the heavens

Do I live? Yes, sir! I pull the trigger

Nice!!!!:thumbs_up :thumbs_up :thumbs_up :thumbs_up :thumbs_up

Omniscient One
11-15-2006, 06:38 PM
Thank you. I feel as if you are the only person reading these things. :lol: