LOVE dreams HOPE

[tear_killer]

love
dream
hope
nothing but pitful words
well to me

love is of the weak minded
someone who thinks they are needed
someone who craves it

dreams are for losers
no one want to dream
i rather do it

hope are for prayers
prayers waiting for a answer
prayers with no answer

i have said what i have said
no more can be said
...or is there still more

[Koa]

I like it :)

[Dyrwen]

Not too shabby. Grammar is a bit off it seems, but the concept is nice.

Ordered and structured..