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moonchilddd
11-02-2006, 07:36 PM
And so i step into the frosty world
and i look to the street and i walk silently
i breath and i feel the winter creed
the rules at the clouds and the sun far beyond
in my heart
in my blood

And i sit near the one with the pretty face
getting those tears that flow
and i think in myself how much i sought
and at what cost
what i became

and i smile at some cross
and i dive within
for sure not at loss

this smile on my face
when you crawled from under burning tiles
but got straight up
yeah got straight up

and i smile at some cross
and i cry deep within
and i sit near the one with the pretty face

i breath the winter creed
in my heart
and in my blood
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Dr Eep
11-03-2006, 06:17 PM
Moonchilddd wrote;
the rules at the clouds and the sun far beyond
in my heart
in my blood

Very special line!! Some people have the ability to write words that seen immortal, that always seem to have been there;
"And so I step into the frosty world"
has that sort universal power to it - great!!:)

tucsongirl
11-04-2006, 12:56 AM
Moonchilddd-
That was beautiful! Thanks for sharing it!

moonchilddd
11-04-2006, 01:17 AM
thanks for nice comment