Breathe (Finally a good love poem by yours truly)

[Phoenix_Tears]

can't begin to describe
This feeling inside
You terrify me
I need you to breathe

It's like some kind of spell on me
Controlling everything i do and see
But if it goes away i won't breathe
You've changed everything i will be

My heart aches for you when you go away
Your scent lingers in my mind all night and day
When your gone, i internally die
I don't want to admit that i love you and i'd cry
If you ever left

When i see you my knees give way
I want you to leave, but i'd die if you didnt stay
When i hear your voice my heart stops and my fingers itch
To touch you, and for one sweet kiss

Before you , before what we do
Before everything that you've helped me through
I was hollow, cold and alone
Angel in stone

My fire you kindled and now i burn bright
Protecting you with my warmth all night
I will never let you go without a fight
Never have i felt something so right....

Check out this picture.. i love it.

[AbdoRinbo]

Who-hoa! You are dark.

[tear_killer]

still so awsome

[Phoenix_Tears]

thank you.. thank you..

by dark did you mean the picture? or my deep emotion for the one i love?

Yes that is right.. for all that have known me since i joined and are familiar with my old philosophy on "love".

Phoenix Tears is falling into love..

[Dyrwen]

Heh, fine work there. Pretty obvious your falling in love too.

[Jay]

I'd say you already ARE in love Phoenix. Like your poem a lot.

[subterranean]

Your poetry also speaks for my heart :)

That's a sweet one

[Jayyy]

Whoa! Is that picture a modification of Alanis from Dogma?

[Phoenix_Tears]

i have no clue..lol. i thought it looked awesome, and inspiring as well.

[azmuse]

gees louise! do you fall in love with black widows often?
j.k. -interesting pic, though
...liked the poem, esp. "I don't want to admit that i love you and i'd cry
If you ever left"

[WX6[ck]]

Hehe nice poem. Good for you to share your feelings with the world, whether they be good or bad.
Heres another pic like that btw

[Remysf]

Young phoenix tears, if your **** doesn't work out, there is always something better around the corner, props for being you, but who really talks like this these days? C'mon find your own voice. The picture is interesting, and the passion of lovers is for death (just be careful). Seperate love and passionate love.
Remysf