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Soul
10-17-2006, 01:46 PM
My name is Soul and I came from Canary Islands, hello everybody, I'm new here. I like write novels, but I'm trying learn english poethy. I think write it without any idea is a risk for that forgive my mistakes, please try to see only the intentions. Here a little bit of that intentions.

The fairy of satisfaction

She’s the reincarnation of Venus
and knows all details of this game
Her best present is to dedicate you
all her love, always for it you pay
The first she does when arrives
at hotel, is to take off the shoes
Do you want she still keep wearing them?
Then, pay her more. Came on!, choose!
She will be everything you want
after you give her the stipulated
Is the fairy of satisfaction
You will feel she’s magical!
For more, you’ll be her sweet baby
Take care!, she will understand
you are the love of her life
if you loan her your gold V.I.S.A.
Afrodita is just a beginner compared to her
It’s clear that in the moment of her birth
the gods wanted she to be the best
She makes magic with your gold V.I.S.A.

lanaia74
10-18-2006, 09:39 AM
VERY well done!

Soul
10-19-2006, 12:34 PM
Thank you Lanaia. I've read something of your work, is sweet.