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WolfLarsen
09-22-2006, 11:28 AM
No City! Erase the Countryside! Collect the Hills & Find Schoenberg a Mountain of Squirming Words!

By Wolf Larsen

Rip the City out of the ground! - Split! – Collapse! – Bulge! Cars! Trains! Airplanes! All jumping out of the sidewalk! Now! – Slither your circling-face! – VLROOOOOOOOM! – BAM! – BAM! - BAM! Drive the words onward! Onward! Onward! Snakes wandering and wandering out of the words! Slosh! Jump! Jump inside of a dog and drive it passed six thousand moons! Stick window into penis! Grab all the billions of humans fornicating in your hands now! And pregnancy! Sidewalks! Buildings! Noise! Dizzy-frenzied-streams of humans flowing down the sidewalk! A music of convulsions! Now! BLAM! BLAM! BLAM! Sharks! Elephants! Children! Craze a poem! Now! Poem! Now!

Copyright 2005 by Wolf Larsen

(First Published in Aries literary magazine, U.S.A.)

TEND
09-22-2006, 12:55 PM
Once again, I can't help but see your work as simply being weird for the sake of weird. Perhaps I'm lacking the analytical skill to properly see what your expressing, but to me, It's just gibberish.

AimusSage
09-22-2006, 01:18 PM
I think it's amazing! Groundbreaking! Stunning! Exhilarating! :nod:

TEND
09-22-2006, 01:30 PM
I think it's amazing! Groundbreaking! Stunning! Exhilarating! :nod:

Do I sense a hint of sarcasm? :lol:

RobinHood3000
09-22-2006, 03:24 PM
I wonder what the Latin is for "Oddity for Oddness' Sake"...

Stewart
09-24-2006, 12:16 PM
It's garbage, plain and simple. I wonder why he bothers. On so many sites, too.