Fragment

[David J]

Here's a fragment of poetry I wrote years ago. I know its not much but I would like to know what you think as I am thinking of writing poetry again

Fragment


Flowers for them were vague
when after they made the hissing grade
This museum will celebrate the culture of the snake

[bbq13]

hmm... i don't get it...

[Dyrwen]

Hm, is that about celebrating the misfortune shown through the mistakes of others, as seen in the Garden of Eden?

heh.. wild guess.

[azmuse]

feel obtuse, foggybrained; what am i missing?

[David J]

Originally posted by Dyrwen
Hm, is that about celebrating the misfortune shown through the mistakes of others, as seen in the Garden of Eden?

heh.. wild guess.

No, I think its about reading too much French Symbolist poetry but I like your suggestion.

Thanks

[Dyrwen]

Ah, well I wouldn't know much about French symbolism, let alone other poetry. Heh.. that'd explain that much.