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tiny explorer
09-14-2006, 08:21 PM
Hi!These passed days i've felt so damn sick of love...well,what i had felt made my heart burst and it just came out of my pen...and I wish to share it with you all..


STRANDED

I hate it when you stare at me
It's as if I can't breathe so easily
Keep your distance,I'm turning defenseless
Tormented by the way I feel your caress

Cease uttering words of sweetness and relief
Don't show loving kindness for you make me believe
Stop,for I might think you like me too
The way my heart has swiftly fallen for you

Coincidences made you closer it seems
Which made me think we were destined
Why among the millions you're here beside me
Though we both know it's not supposed to be

She holds your heart with a grip so tight
And I know for certain,with her you'll be alright
So vague to love you it's just so wrong
But why you're still here?...I can't move on

hope you all liked it...maybe it has expressed my feelings

lanaia74
09-15-2006, 09:44 AM
VERY well done!:flare: :(