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MexThorn
09-11-2006, 10:47 AM
My world is upside down
Thinking is a flood
Dramatic events drownd the start
Aimless glory fills my body
When only the end seems relevant
Lost in a dark room with a tiny crack of light
I breathe a gust of infected air
My body shuts down
But my mind lingers
Troubled souls punish my cry
Only I know my own pain.



Thank you for reading my poem. Please leave any feedback I would love to hear what you have to say.



~Mex

P.S. Sorry! I accidently posted in the wrong section!

lanaia74
09-14-2006, 10:38 AM
:alien: This was really very well done!:flare: :lol:

MexThorn
09-14-2006, 11:07 AM
Thank you lanaia :)