To my Mother

[WX6[ck]]

I wrote this poem for my Mother. I have some family 'troubles' and i just want my Mother to know she is appreciated.

To my dearest Mother:
You cradelled me when I was young
Like a leaf holding a drop of Autumn dew
Watch me grow, guiding me with a Mother's touch
You'll always be there for my needs
Always there to help
I hope you will enjoy these flowers
And cherish them for what they mean
A thanks and appreciation for my Mother

[ihrocks]

Sorry to hear about the family problems. As a Mom I can tell you, your Mom is going to treasure that poem for a very long time.

Best of luck,

ihrocks

[azmuse]

i Like, esp. "leaf... Autumn dew" this went straight to the heart...hope things improve soon.

[fayefaye]

are you the same person who wrote care=greedxlust? If i remember correctly, most of your poems are pretty dark; so I was surprised to find this one so warm. It's really nice. I remember you saying your family were the only people you really cared about, so I really hope things work out for you.

[AbdoRinbo]

The poem reeks of Oedipus.

[fayefaye]

abdo, that's so disgusting. Please-no.

[WX6[ck]]

Thank you all, whats oedipus?

[nicholasburrus]

Sweet

[Jay]

ehm, you really don't wanna know if you don't know already

*hope I'm thinking about the same thing Ab and Faye had in mind, but of Faye's reply, I am...*

[AbdoRinbo]

Jay. :D

[fayefaye]

jay, you are thinking what we had in mind. :) telepathy or what?

[Jay]

hey guys :)

ok, so now I've become something characteristic or what Ab? ;). lol, say Jay and state it all :D

Faye, me? Telepathy? NO WAY ;), but I wish so when sitting exams ;) :D

[AbdoRinbo]

You're very characteristic, Jay. :)