Lord of the Flies Chain Story.. With Girls

[xCHARLii3x92x]

Just thought it would be fun if we started our own story.. i meen why not?? :D

[xCHARLii3x92x]

So why not start it like this.. crappy beginning but so what

Ralph lowered the conch from his lips and gazed around at all the others who had found their way thanks to him. He watched intently at a bunch of little'uns playing in the sand and unwillingly smiled. As he settled his gaze a new figuire entered the picture. Taller than the little'uns but of smaller frame than the rest of the boys, he approached cautiously. It took him a moment or two to fully realise that this was no ordinary boy; this was a female..
Before long he was away in his own world and walked straight in to her.
"Sorry..um.....I didn't see you there" Ralph stuttered.
"That's alright" said the girl. Ralph just looked at her in awe.
"Whats your name?" Ralph urged out.
"My name's Louise.. Me and my friends heard your shell and came..You're Ralph, right?" Ralph listened to her voice and it relaxed him.
"Friends?"

[sanmartin]

What point in LOTF is this set? The beginning, before everything goes down hill, or some other part?

[tank16]

ralph was stirred out of his thoughts, extended his hand and smiled. "yeah, friends." Louise smiled and took ralph's hand in hers and shook it, ralph couldn't help but notice how small and dainty her hands were. "and your friends?" Louise looked at him ignorantly, "who?... oh yeah! i'll go get them!" she ran into the woods and returned with four girls, looking like they ranged from ages 12 to 16 years old. "these are tanya, june, victoria, and chloe, girls, this is ralph" the shortest of the three girls stepped forward and wrapped ralph in a suffocating hug, then released him and said with a french accent "my name ees chloe, ah em pleased to meet jou," the tallest girl walked up and embraced him, and kissed both of his burning red cheeks and said with a russian accent "mah name ees tanya petrenko, i am from moskow russia." after meeting the girls, ralph walked to the spring and splashed water on his face, then sat down and stared into space like :eek6::drool5: