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susanhollister
08-09-2006, 10:23 PM
dreams maybe

beautiful ones

those of nature, of love, of freedom

of carefree moments and feelings,

of riding horses and car racing,

of good talks with people,

of meeting strangers who'll change your life forever,

of traveling or making yours or someone else's dreams come true

for solitude

silence, meditation, being alone

finding refuge within your own self

seeking inner being, looking for soul

intertwining reality and idealism

bridging the past and perhaps the future

checking the hourglass and what I've done

reaching out to my own inner core

peace . . . at peace.

Page
08-25-2006, 04:31 PM
This reminded me of the beauty of simplicity. Thanks Susan.

Just one thing.
There is some redundancy here in these lines, but it doesn't take away from the poem's sweetness.

for solitude

silence, meditation, being alone

finding refuge within your own self

seeking inner being, looking for soul

intertwining reality and idealism