Just an ephemeral Hope

[fayefaye]

Dreams that lye as stars at night
Amidst the cold, the unpenetratable darkness

Watch them shimmer,
watch them glimmer,
Final flicker as they disappear into the night.

[fayefaye]

I once wrote of my poetry that it 'reads like the lyrics from some uninspired song, with uneven stanzas and no sense of rhythm.'

:) Just thought I'd steal the thunder off whoever wanted to write that.

[azmuse]

feels very ephemeral, like dreaming into the skye on a windy night, seeing your breath mist

[azmuse]

oops hadn't read the title before posting with the "e" word...very aptly named :)

[Koa]

I like it...so simple and effective :)

I like your definition too, I think I can relate with that too...

Hey hey hey!!! Last Monday I wrote one poem and a half, after months of uninspiration... let's celebrate! ;) ;) ;) (sorry don't want to steal your thread, I just was happy about this)

[fayefaye]

congrats koa. I'm just happy people even replied to my poem. It's not very good. You should post yours up. :)

[fayefaye]

Originally posted by azmuse
feels very ephemeral, like dreaming into the skye on a windy night, seeing your breath mist

that's just the sort of feeling I was going for. thanks. :)

[Koa]

Originally posted by fayefaye
congrats koa. I'm just happy people even replied to my poem. It's not very good. You should post yours up. :)

There's nothing I really feel like posting now (especially the new ones, one is not too good and in Italian, the other one is too private and unfinished yet), but if you're interested in becoming one of my fans ;) you can look for the ones I posted in old topics.