Nothing More

[Dani*18]

To kiss your lips
To feel you touch, I hunger for
Only it and nothing more

To see your smile
To hear your voice, I wish for
Only it and nothing more

To need you here
To hold you close, I live for
Only it and nothing more

To see you wake
To hear you laugh, I miss for
Only it and nothing more

To see you walking
To the door, I cry for
Only it and nothing more

To hear goodbye
To need your kiss, I long for
Only it and nothing more

To go back
To the days of us, I hope for
Only it and nothing more

[hobo]

great poem, but it makes life hard to put that much into one person.

[Juarez Fialho]

I really liked the image you created with the italic on the second verse of each strophe. I agree with hobo though… There is one thing I’ve learned from life: you should only love someone else when it does not interfere with loving yourself. Love yourself in first place and you will have much more to give (and receive)…

[Dani*18]

Thanks so much for your thoughts and sorry it's taking so long for me to write but it's just a poem, i do love myself but you have a good point.

[genuis_tariq]

To kiss your lips
To feel you touch, I hunger for
Only it and nothing more

To see your smile
To hear your voice, I wish for
Only it and nothing more

To need you here
To hold you close, I live for
Only it and nothing more

To see you wake
To hear you laugh, I miss for
Only it and nothing more

To see you walking
To the door, I cry for
Only it and nothing more

To hear goodbye
To need your kiss, I long for
Only it and nothing more

To go back
To the days of us, I hope for
Only it and nothing more





Simplicity.........all I will call it.
Your poem shows how pure your feelings are.
And one thing more your poem has persian rhyme scheme.
Keep it up

[Dani*18]

Thank you so much for you comment i love hearing from people and getting feed back i'm really glad you liked it!