Changes!

[oXCherryBabyXo]

This is an old poem that I've drastically changed. I have how it was posted as "A poem I just wrote..." I took the advice and tried to focus it on something specific. Please help me and tell me if it's any better than the old one.

Listening to life go by
Focusing on what could go wrong
Nothing seemed to go right--
Until I met you.
You’re love has changed me
For the better.
I am who I am and you don’t
Want to change that.
You’re smile has the power
To transform me.
Into the girl I really am.
Looking into your eyes
I see true love
Nothing has ever felt this real,
As though everything will
Go right as long as
I’m in your arms
Forever and always.

By: Monica Wormsbecher