Dark

[Sorrow]

Dark

This sensation that I'm feeling is something new for me,
Never before have I faced such numbing obsurity,
The thunder clouds are formed out along the bay, the darkness in my heart will not leave today. I roll with the pointlessness of existing in this way each ticking second that scratches by gnaws my soul away.
The path I'm on right now is swallowed by the black, up ahead there's nothing but worse I can't go back. Each new day that dawns is the same as the last there's nothing here but emptiness as I move further down the path. Where are all the people that I used to know? Why aren't they walking with me, where did they all go?

[behindblueeyes]

It has a good rhythm/rhyme scheme. i like it!

[thevintagepiper]

I like the content of the poem...but it takes an effort to keep the rhythm rolling.

[Sarka]

Dude. That's dark. Pretty awesome. What "thevintagepiper" said about the rhythm, kind of. It's cool, but it's a little difficult to tell, like, how the rhythm is supposed to go. I like it though. :nod: