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Boogiie___x
05-31-2006, 08:47 PM
What is that place?
A wasteland of dreamers broken?
This dark and hollow space,
A place where marvelous ideas go unspoken.
Great dreamers often wasted,
Their dreams and schemes left overturned..
By failure and the thoughts of new worlds never tasted..
By plans left undone and lessons never learned.
A wasteland of loves forgotten..
Broken hearts from lost lovers never found..
All these betrayed hearts go on rotten..
Broken words of promises never bound.
What are these places,
With so many lost faces?

agony~ecstacy
06-02-2006, 03:25 PM
this poem is so pretty

Boogiie___x
06-02-2006, 04:36 PM
Whyy..thank you..I wrote it in high school and used it for English and my teacher loved it so i posted it..<33

mir
06-02-2006, 05:33 PM
nice! i like it a lot!

Sorrow
06-14-2006, 12:29 AM
Nice poem. It has a good rythm.

caesar
06-14-2006, 12:54 AM
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! :thumbs_up

Have you read, "Dream within a dream" by Poe. My favourite. It expresses despair in the most painfully explicit manner.