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spally
05-25-2006, 03:42 PM
In the Garden of Eden
For bidden to see
Love that was meant to bloom
Can not long be
Eden is beauty
And this song that I sing
Reminds all of those
Who can seem to see

Living and loving
Breath become death
Into the arms of the night
Sing this song
And let love become death
Forget me not
In Eden’s garden

Dismal and black
And Eden is here
Death is becoming
And we can not see
That Eden is not a garden
Eden is a grave yard
And haunted to be
That loving here
Brings you nothing but pain

Headstones and grave pits
The path is long
To the end of this garden
Watch where you step
For love, if you fall
Be buried alive
Eden consumes you
You can not breathe
And death becomes you
Moon light surrounds you
End of the garden
End of this love

That’s all there is
Don’t think to hard
the only love
Is the love of the graves
Because gardens are not gardens
They are grave yards in disguise

imrad
05-31-2006, 03:32 PM
ok i admitt some of ur poems arent all that great but this one is pretty good.

Boogiie___x
05-31-2006, 08:31 PM
I love it babe<3

Twisted_Sister
06-28-2006, 05:26 AM
i think its beautiful! two thumbs way way up lol

amanda_isabel
06-28-2006, 07:29 AM
i like it...