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spally
05-24-2006, 11:29 PM
Dance with me under the stars
Forget this world
Leave it all behind
Forget your worries
For just this one dance
Dance with me in the eye of the moon
Washing all the worries away
Dancing like it’s what we were meant to do
Looking like an angle
Singing like a bird
The night is still young
Holding me tight
Swaying form left to right
This will be the last time we meet
Dancing like this
Midnight is coming
And the night will then end
So lets dance with the stars in the eye of the moon
Wind blowing, train’s whistles
How long will we stay on this balcony?
To dance like this
To feel this way
It tells me that this is right
Your eyes, your touch
With music around
The night is ending
And it will be done
Wind dying, trains fading
Moon so bright I see you smile
Wishing upon the stars that you never forget
So before we both forget
And leave this place
Share this last dance with me

amanda_isabel
05-25-2006, 01:54 PM
:) i like it!

kurious
05-25-2006, 02:07 PM
I enjoyed your poem.

spally
05-25-2006, 03:27 PM
thank you.

imrad
05-31-2006, 03:35 PM
i think this one is my fav so far it kinda has like a free feeling to it.

Jerrybaldy
08-24-2010, 06:48 PM
I could see you were a long timer returning, so just had a look at your back catalogue and found this from 2006. You are gonna have to trust me I found it after writing 'Let's dance', but I was struck by the similarities and 4 years on would like to add my appreciation to your poem as a very late arrival ( almost terminal :) )
Jerry

spally
08-24-2010, 07:02 PM
i trust you, and thanks. not all my stuff is that great, half the time it just comesout and i put in down. lol

Delta40
08-24-2010, 07:36 PM
I like this poem. it has a nice romantic pace to it