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star120
05-09-2006, 12:07 AM
recently, i read a poem from "poetry 180"..the name of the poem is "Ever After". it is written by Joyce Sutphen. share with everybody with your thought...

Ever After
by Joyce Sutphen

What am I to you now that you are no
longer what you used to be to me?

Who are we to each other now that
there is no us, now that what we once

were is divided into me and you
who are not one but two separate and

unrelated persons except for that ex-
that goes in front of the words

that used to mean me, used to mean
you, words we rarely used (husband, wife)

as when we once posed (so young and helpless)
with our hands (yours, mine) clasped on the knife

that was sinking into the tall white cake.
All that sweetness, the layers of one thing
and then another, and then one thing again

star120
05-09-2006, 01:28 AM
nobody read this poem at all?

Truth Untold
05-10-2006, 12:48 PM
i have now - i like it!

star120
05-10-2006, 02:31 PM
i have now - i like it!

so, how you feel? do you think this is a sad poem? do you think that the poet and her husband are still friends?

star120
05-10-2006, 02:33 PM
i have now - i like it!

any commons about this poem?

Eagleheart
05-10-2006, 03:18 PM
This poem sounds more like a parable to me ...Inclined to say some good words about it ...Far from being exceptional,but frankly touching...

Truth Untold
05-11-2006, 02:12 PM
initially it reminded me of my ex until i realsied it was a husband and wife - but it still applies i guess.
layers of the cake jump out as being aymbolic to me - something like as they go thorugh the marriage they'll strip away each others layers and see each other for what they really are maybe.

deesha88
05-18-2006, 02:44 PM
Good poem... really sad though