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tear_killer
11-09-2003, 08:18 PM
Blood dripping from my hands,
blood everywhere
blood ozzing out of her
blood on the knife
she had it comeing
knife marks in her
knife with blood on it
knife in one hand
knife in my hand
she had it comeing
hear her mouning
hear her cry
hear her scream for help
hear me laugh
she had it comeing
a little life in the *****,
a wanting for blood lust from her,
a dangerous killer in me
a little smerk from me
she had it coming
its to late for sorrys
its to late for help
its to late for pleading
its to late for me to stop
she had it comeing,
look at all the blood
look at lake
look at her
LOOK AT THE ***** WHO MADE FUN OF ME
she had it comeing
you made fun of me
you said you were my friend
you are my enemy
you made me do this
she had it comeing
watch me throw her body into the lake
watch her drown
watch her gasp for air
watch me laugh
she had it coming.

WX6[ck]
11-09-2003, 08:28 PM
Nice *unearthly grin*. i like the repetitivness <-- i hate this word<.

Koa
11-11-2003, 04:27 PM
Yeah the repetitions are very good, they give power...

Sorry, I can't help it: shouldn't it be spelled 'COMING', or am i missing something???

eshcolit
11-13-2003, 11:41 PM
you are missing something

Jay
11-14-2003, 06:21 AM
I agree with Koa, I also think it's COMING, but then it really doesn't matter as long as I understand... But then: it's TOO late for...

Tear_killer said it him/herself s/he's not hot with grammar