Bang!!!

[EpItApH]

Bang!... The sudden thunder from the door being shut woke me up from the sound sleep, which was misleading me into these pleasant dreams; deeper and deeper...

Back on the ground I stand now.. Floating in air is not for all.. who was I kidding!! Did I forget my wings had been destroyed brutally ever since I was born?! Chipped, Burned, Torn, Cut in pieces, GONE.


Oh sweet Lord.. I pray to thee.. I thank you Lord, for waking me..

To be on this ground is my destiny.. and to float in the cotton fogs of happiness would be the biggest lie ever uttered in history...



Thou shall not steal

Thou shall not lie

Thou shall have sex till they call me a whore

Thou shall bleed till I cant take anymore



The worst is, on the ground I don't know what I seek.. It's all a blurr, If I'm being true.. to you.. or me..


Irony, my bitter candy.. Up in the fog, clarity you find.. while down here seeking answers makes you go blind.


To walk these broken roads again... I need some new shoes...With slutty high heals.. some tight leather boots..


Pick me up.. Take me home.. Rape me till all the clean is gone...

Rape me till I bleed from every inch of disgust.. Rape me till the new bruises cover up the old.. Rape me till my last breath till my body’s turned frozen cold.

[Xamonas Chegwe]

Some clever phrases in here, "cotton fogs of happiness", "seeking answers makes you go blind", "Rape me till all the clean is gone".

It's very dark; very ****ing dark. I'm not sure whether to recommend a publisher or an analyst. ;)

[ktd222]

OK then, have you come up with a title or disclaimer? Now the rest of my time on this earth is officially f***ed.


Pick me up.. Take me home.. Rape me till all the clean is gone...

Rape me till I bleed from every inch of disgust.. Rape me till the new bruises cover up the old.. Rape me till my last breath till my body’s turned frozen cold

Is this passive? Who might do this? Did you take this from the Bible?

[Pensive]

Ouchers, that's very dark, indeed.

[EpItApH]

Thanks for your comments. Appreciate.

@ktd222: I found your comment somehow disturbing to my 9th sense.. hehe.. lol.
Out of the Bible?! no sir! I did not. To be honest, never read the Bible. :p
Each and every word comes from my very own brain cells, thank you very much :D
Passive?, Yes it is.
Who might be? no idea... But I can recall I was somewhat mad at my boyfriend while writting this, lol :s But some of the parts I should clarify (like the first two paragraphs for instance) has to do with my parents at present and the reminiscing of the bitter childhood I've had. :)

This was just a mixutre of feelings I was going through which I vomited into a so called poem :-)

@Xamonas: wow.. I'm honoured thank you. (6)

@Pensive: cool, thanks for reading :)