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spally
04-21-2006, 11:25 AM
seeing your face after all this time
has brouhgt back feeling i thought had died
what have you done to my sences
where did you seal my heart
oh all the tears i cried
would the heartach just die
why am i crying over you now
after all this time has passed
you'd think that i would be through
yet just when i was over you
my heart cried out for you
your face is haughting
voice is still hear
i feel all the joy, all the pain
from when you walked away
you left me with sence of failure
yet you set me free
now as i sit here writing
my tears are falling and they wont seem to stop
why have you chosen me
to cry tears over you
i can't stand this feeling
of loving you like this
i hated to lose
yet i can't stand to see you
not when my heartachs like this
where did you seal my heart
when will i get it back
will this heartach die away
when will i stop loving you like this
all of my friends say that its just a faze
that you will soon fade away
so please fade away tonight
set me free from your memory
my heart can't take much more
my tears seem to be slowing
stoping soon i hope
so be rid of you i say

Xamonas Chegwe
04-21-2006, 02:19 PM
Cheer up! It's not the end of the world - he's not worth it - they're all bastards! I know - I am one!! :D

This is relentlessly gloomy without being gloomy about anything specific. There doesn't seem to be any of 'you' in it - it could be any girl crying on the stairs at a party with a crowd of friends gathered round providing the kinds of words I started with above. Try and be more personal.