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miranda23
04-12-2006, 07:45 PM
with every breath taking moment
cant seem to get him out my head
yet breathing again I loose my breath
how can I love thee so much
when he's cold when embraced by his touch
eyes to eyes listening to him speak
of how many dreams hell complete with me
yet drying my eyes on the pillow at night
falling asleep alone with the moonlight
ive wished for love that would be a bliss
not to love so much and feel poisoned by his kiss
I swear he loves and I love him too
but why love someone when they hurt you
its a sickness I cant overcome
in the next breath I know he's the one
loves something you want so desperately
and I love and love him so sadly

Charles Darnay
04-12-2006, 08:02 PM
Nice. However, the "thee" kind of sticks out like a sore thumb - it doesn't really match the tone.

And why did you post it so many times?