burned black

[alissa]

one more put down
a forgotten promise
my heart was found with an empty kiss
step harder next time
feel my life compress
another cut, fewer tears
stare in my eyes, feel my fear
drag me away
under your breathe
into the gray
of a silent death
one more star
has burned itself black
fallen too far
to make its way back
so let it go

[Jay]

I like this poem. Especially the ending, the last line is different from the previous ones and in my opinion it's emphasising the point...