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jon1jt
03-13-2006, 10:29 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OO
sdr4jc
03-13-2006, 10:42 AM
Jon I love how descriptive this is. You've used several similes here and successfully turned a frightening experience into literary artwork!

I must say, I think things like this are what poetry is all about! Great work!
sdr4jc
03-13-2006, 02:46 PM
You edited...I still love it!!