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white camellia
03-06-2006, 02:50 PM
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blp
03-08-2006, 01:08 PM
Nice at the start and end. A bit lost in the middle maybe.
white camellia
03-10-2006, 12:29 PM
you got lost in the middle?-
not a good news to me but understandable ...
really odd that she even becomes jealous of(if that indelible gaze means this)the intimacy between man and the woman...
but dear blp, it pleases me that you feel good about the start and end.