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spally
03-01-2006, 12:12 PM
i'm lost, i'm torn.
you yelling those hateful words,
cutting through to my soul.
who am i? am i dirt?
should i leave when the next wind blows?
do you care if i live?
do you care if i cry?
do you care if i bleed?
do you care if i die?
i shed no tears,
not when you put me down.
i do not bleed,
when you turn your back on me.
i just live my life,
day by ongoing day.
and when my end comes,
i'll just let you know.
i never cried,
i lived my life,
and i will never die.

genoveva
03-04-2006, 02:43 PM
If you wanted to revise, try answering the questions you have posed.