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Kathygail
02-10-2006, 03:46 AM
Hello everyone!

My name is Kathy and I LOVE reading and writing Poetry.

No, I've never been to spain (or Egypt)..still...

I can't think of a better way to start then by posting this one that I wrote last year:

"EVENING AT THE PYRMIDS"


Far below the dog star's slumber,
far below the crab;
fell among the chrome cast shadows,
fell and lodged against night's brow.

Dripping
down that seamless stairway;
dripping
down upon the slabs
of sided pillows, dusted even
are the frozen castle trowels.



....................................

KJ

Pensive
02-10-2006, 06:08 AM
Hi Cathy, Welcome to the forum!

You can post your poetry in this forum.

Virgil
02-10-2006, 07:58 AM
Welcome Kathy. I liked your poem. Nice use of alliteration. I hope to see more poems.

Darlin
02-12-2006, 03:20 AM
Greetings, Kathygail and welcome to the forum. :wave:

Logos
02-19-2006, 08:35 AM
Hello Kathy, it's a lovely poem, and I will move this to the Personal Poetry section now :)