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Samantha21
01-31-2006, 07:57 PM
Two years have gone by
many days i had to cry

I miss you more and more each day
heres what i have to say

I love you dad, i always will
When you were taken i was killed

No one understood our lover for each other
Not even Bobby, my only brother

Communicating through only dreams
Waking up from my screams

I wish you were here to hug me tight
And rub my back like u did at night

Ill never forget the times we shared
you'll never know how much i cared

You may know now, but its not the same
From all your friends' love, you had fame

If i had one more visit, all i would do
is hug you forever and say I love you

adilyoussef
02-03-2006, 10:24 AM
I see that you love your dad a lot. I hope you find peace and rest. Losing a deared person is not the least easy to bear. Just carry on. I like your poems.

mike-eustace
02-03-2006, 11:49 AM
a very well written poem on a tough subject - unfortunately close to me recently. keep writing. all the best