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Weeping Willow
01-30-2006, 04:56 PM
This one is dedicated to all of you that suffer...
since the feeling of being usless is burning me....
and all i wish is for you to smile..even for a bit..

From Sam to Frodo

The pain of life I will Defeat
The pain of Death i'll Bravely meet
The pain of love I cannot heal
The pain of souls i'm here to steal

I see the pain down deep inside
As all you want is run and hide
But here I am my dearest friend
to take it all to put an end

Now all I do is sit an whine
For time that's gone, lost in my mind
So please my friend forgive me now
since all I want is you to smile

IrishCanadian
02-01-2006, 07:41 PM
The pain of love i cannot heal
Good line

Xamonas Chegwe
02-01-2006, 08:01 PM
Very nice. But I think it's more like what Frodo would say to Sam - especially the 1st & 3rd stanzas. Just my view though. It's still nice.

Weeping Willow
02-02-2006, 02:38 AM
hehe.... thank you both..
but the name is dedicated to Rachel soo i know she gets it.. :D ....