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ihrocks
10-22-2003, 11:54 PM
Scared little girl,
Motherless child.

Red-rimmed eyes
And tear-stained cheeks,
Hiding in the reflection
Of a grown woman.

Across the years,
Their eyes meet.

And each asks
Woman/child
In an echovoice only the
Other can hear…

"Why was my love not enough?"




ihrocks
Sindhu
10-23-2003, 01:30 AM
It's beautiful,; thank God those mirror images and those echo voices are not publicy visible or audible or what would life be like?
ihrocks
10-23-2003, 08:18 PM
Perhaps we'd all be kinder to each other.

ihrocks
Sindhu
10-24-2003, 12:14 AM
Perhaps we'd all be kinder to each other.

ihrocks
I wish! But I'm rather scared it might have just the opposite effect!