M m m

[white camellia]

M m m
I devour your pompous vanity
In my peptic lying close coyly
Then I can have you picked out
In a golden October

I'm your bird of prey
Hovering over
You're one of the
Megamegamega
Apples

Of a
Redredred
Joy
From
the fertile orchard

M m m
I can't believe that
She's the sourest one ever
But much the one
I need

O G o d
I need her
From Paradise to Heorot to Hel
She calls me
E m p e r o r

[Outlander]

I very Much enjoyed this,
read aloud in the style of Dr. Lector
or kept silent as a whisper in the mind;
It is Yummy in both ways and should be enjoyed as such.

Excellent work, made me smile.

[blp]

Really excellent, yes. Megamegamega, in fact. Seriously. Really unusual, original and punchy.

[white camellia]

read aloud in the style of Dr. Lector
or kept silent as a whisper in the mind;
Indeed, Outlander, I read it again in these two ways, and I even found "I" in it cute. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it, to me, in such a sweet way...


Really unusual, original and punchy
Thank you so, blp! Actually, I just assumed that how a man feels when a woman adores him that much ...

[Charles Darnay]

A very fresh modern poem.... I like it!

[blp]

As must be obvious, I'm going through w's poems at the moment. I never properly expressed how much I like this one. It makes me giggle. May well be my favourite. But it's not how I feel when woman adores me - unfortunately. ;)