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white camellia
12-24-2005, 01:14 PM
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Virgil
12-24-2005, 01:23 PM
Hey, that's excellent. Your last line knocks me off my feet. This poem is absolutely perfect.
starrwriter
12-24-2005, 02:43 PM
I am you
And you are me
And we are all together

Wasn't that some lyrics from a Beatles song?

Regardless, I enjoyed your poem.
white camellia
12-25-2005, 11:42 AM
Oh, now I know, I just wrote something "amazing" as Beatles'... :p
And which song? I cannot wait to adventure...

Glad to hear of your enjoyment!!! ;)


knocks me off my feet
--Virgil, you surprise me! Thank you!!! :blush:
Virgil
12-25-2005, 12:22 PM
--Virgil, you surprise me! Thank you!!! :blush:

Why?...............
starrwriter
12-25-2005, 12:31 PM
Oh, now I know, I just wrote something "amazing" as Beatles'... And which song? I cannot wait to adventure...
I think the lyrics are from "I am The Walrus."
Virgil
12-25-2005, 12:46 PM
Camelia - Perhaps a different title would be best. Sounds a little corny. I didn't read the title earlier.
white camellia
12-26-2005, 12:30 PM
starrwriter, I found the song 'I am The Walrus' quite interesting!!! :nod:
This is the first stanza from it:

I am he as you are he as you are me and we are all together.
See how they run like pigs from a gun, see how they fly.
I'm crying.
and the last:

Semolina pilchard, climbing up the eiffel tower.
Elementary penguin singing hari krishna.
Man, you should have seen them kicking edgar allan poe.
I am the eggman, they are the eggmen.
I am the walrus, goo goo g'joob g'goo goo g'joob.
Goo goo g'joob g'goo goo g'joob g'goo.
and Oh, why Edgar Allan Poe here? :confused:

Corny? Metropolis far away intoxicated in its fancy ball, countryside teemed with Corns is where I dwell and dance with the words written in the primeval wind. ;)
So, what title would be graceful if you could think of one for me? :p
Virgil
12-26-2005, 12:43 PM
"Together"?
white camellia
12-26-2005, 12:53 PM
:lol: Bravo! The same as my first thought...
Virgil
12-27-2005, 04:51 PM
:lol: Bravo! The same as my first thought...

Given that we both appreciate D.H. Lawrence, we must think along the same lines.
Anon22
01-01-2006, 11:11 PM
Wonderful, even though the title does sound corny. I agree, it should be "Together" but its too short, and is missing something. So the title I would give it would be "Together, You and I"
white camellia
01-24-2006, 12:58 AM
So the title I would give it would be "Together, You and I"
That would be very nice, DigitalCrash, but I think "Together" is enough. We know that here it is talking about "You and I". Beside these two titles, I incline to another better title, which says the same as the original one "I am You and You are I", but does not sound "corny". :)