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Carmella
10-17-2003, 04:20 PM
The Written Word

Let me walk you through the reading room,
Where many books reside
Where imagination, doubt and doom,
Are written there inside.

A thirst for knowledge you will find
In every page you roam
There’s learning here of every kind
In sentence and in poem.

Take down a book and delve inside,
And see what you may find
Within these words, no meanings hide,
Except the literal kind.

For Dickens, Hardy, Orwell and friends,
They too began this way.
No matter whether time transcends,
Just read some more each day.

Lift up a book, at any time,
Let your mind be taken in,
By stories, set in words sublime,
Of people, kith and kin.

When weather it turns cold and damp
There’s nothing much to do,
But, sit awhile beside your lamp,
A book will see you through.

To praise the written word if I may,
For solitary hours we spend
To live and learn from day to day,
A book will be your friend.

AbdoRinbo
10-17-2003, 05:34 PM
It's 'Sesame Street' with a twist of genius. :D

Me likes.

b
10-17-2003, 06:46 PM
This is quite smooth and fun:
Literature approaced idyllicly!
Nice poem!

Carmella
10-17-2003, 08:35 PM
Writing, particularly non-fiction is my life, however, I have a great love of poetry, indeed the written word as my signature suggests.

Thank you very much for your comments.

Koa
10-18-2003, 12:07 PM
Sorry, but I don't like it... Too 'educational-didactic style'....It's well written but not my kind of subject I guess. Just my taste anyway, not a technical critic. :)

AbdoRinbo
10-18-2003, 10:43 PM
Technical criticism is seldom very helpful, Koa. ;)

You're charmingly honest.

Kendall
10-19-2003, 12:13 AM
Not really my style either, but it's quite cool. Maybe you should write educational literature books in rhyme for children. That's what it reminds me of anyway, neat. 8)

AbdoRinbo
10-19-2003, 12:25 AM
God, I love that avatar. ;)

Carmella
10-19-2003, 08:18 AM
Thankis for the comments, I did write it for children of all ages.

Glad you like my Avator. It is of course the wise old owl. Though in reality of course, owls are not actually all that wise.