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shakira106
12-10-2005, 10:51 PM
some of my poetry

The purpose

I felt alone not long ago
I was living life with the flow
I met a special addition to my life
making my existence and worth turn bright
everything around me meant much more
now I realize what the heart is for.

Pam J Poitras

Personal Hell

Abusing my mind becomes the case,
feeling my thoughts and heartbeat race
seeing nothing but cold dark rain,
I feel as though nothing is the same
I start to fade into the dark
I lost my chance to make my mark
sinking into the ground I spin
feeling as though I lived my life in sin
going down deeper I begin to dwell
I soon realize Im in my own personal hell.

Pam J Poitras

IrishCanadian
12-15-2005, 12:34 AM
I really like the first one.
But you need to use this part of the web site:
http://www.online-literature.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=14
Take it easy --cheers!