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Cherrylv
12-03-2005, 08:46 PM
Lies!!!

For so long I had no idea
Lies ran from your lips
As the stream runs to the sea
Did you ever truly love me?

You lived in another world
I was not allowed to enter
Other women were there
Did you ever really care?

So many words spoken
So many promises broken
Scheming that I fell prey to
Did I ever really know you?

All those years are now tears
My memories driftwood floating
The current flows too fast
To hold happy thoughts fast

I no longer know what truth is
Your wall of lies blocks my view
Happiness has been damned
As I fight to reach dry land

Love once held within its cup
Has long since trickled away
Lost to desert sands
Held by different hands

Was the cup ever truly full?
Was its existence just another lie?
As a widow I remember the past
Lies within reflections on pools of glass
By Cherry

brandon w
12-05-2005, 01:46 AM
Tell me how old you are, then I will give you my mixed oppinion

Cherrylv
12-05-2005, 01:53 PM
Ok Brandon, I am 48 years young and going through a divorce. LOL now I have probably said too much :)

Thanks for looking at my poem, please give me your opinions.

Lautschrift
12-07-2005, 09:11 AM
realisation and breakdown
you took off the pink glasses

lost all this time

now finding something new seems hard

mmmmhh i can sense more here

Cherrylv
12-08-2005, 07:19 PM
Wow Lautschrift!!

How did you read so much and be so right?

The realisation nearly tore me apart, we had been married so long. The pain is still there even after over two years of separation.

I am at Uni now, trying something new but it is hard and sometimes I doubt myself and want to hide myself away or wake up from a bad dream.

There is more. My life seems to be an uphill struggle and I am not sure I will reach the top but I must go on because I am afraid of falling.

Hmmmmm you are very intuitive ((hugs))

Thanks for reading my poem and commenting :)

Lautschrift
12-08-2005, 09:14 PM
i truly could feel where you are, at this moment
I send you all my possitve vibes

keep going
every day we wake up to our own reality

and for so many of us it is hard to face what is right in front of us


live in the moment i would suggest, take a minute at the time

Huggs you backkkkkkkk

Cherrylv
12-10-2005, 07:37 PM
Thanks so much for the positive vibes ((hugs))

Yep I try to live each day as it comes but even with my best efforts some days it is sooo hard.
I do try to be positive but if I feel down or just need to vent then it usually comes out in the form of poetry. :)

Thanks again and thanks for the hugs :)