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needing
11-23-2005, 08:01 AM
Aslamo Alekom
I want your help today ...please

Just
I want the meain idea ( in general) for each poem in 4 lines with use simple language and correct grammar

SONNET 33
Full many a glorious morning have I seen
Flatter the mountain-tops with sovereign eye*,
Kissing with golden face the meadows green,
Gilding pale streams with heavenly alchemy;
Anon permit the basest clouds to ride
With ugly rack* on his celestial face,
And from the forlorn world his visage hide,
Stealing unseen to west with this disgrace*:
Even so my sun one early morn did shine
With all triumphant splendor on my brow;
But out, alack! he was but one hour mine;
The region cloud hath mask'd him from me now.
Yet him for this my love no whit disdaineth;
Suns of the world may stain when heaven's sun staineth



Sonnet 34

Why didst thou promise such a beauteous day,
And make me travel forth without my cloak,
To let base clouds o'ertake me in my way,
Hiding thy bravery in their rotten smoke?
'Tis not enough that through the cloud thou break,
To dry the rain on my storm-beaten face,
For no man well of such a salve can speak
That heals the wound and cures not the disgrace:
Nor can thy shame give physic to my grief;
Though thou repent, yet I have still the loss:
The offender's sorrow lends but weak relief
To him that bears the strong offence's cross.
Ah! but those tears are pearl which thy love sheds,
And they are rich and ransom all ill deeds.



SONNET 35
No more be grieved at that which thou hast done:
Roses have thorns, and silver fountains mud;
Clouds and eclipses stain both moon and sun,
And loathsome canker lives in sweetest bud.
All men make faults, and even I in this,
Authorizing thy trespass with compare,
Myself corrupting, salving thy amiss,
Excusing thy sins more than thy sins are;
For to thy sensual fault I bring in sense--
Thy adverse party is thy advocate--
And 'gainst myself a lawful plea commence:
Such civil war is in my love and hate
That I an accessary needs must be
To that sweet thief which sourly robs from me.



SONNET 42
That thou hast her, it is not all my grief,
And yet it may be said I loved her dearly;
That she hath thee, is of my wailing chief,
A loss in love that touches me more nearly.
Loving offenders, thus I will excuse ye:
Thou dost love her, because thou knowst I love her;
And for my sake even so doth she abuse me,
Suffering my friend for my sake to approve her.
If I lose thee, my loss is my love's gain,
And losing her, my friend hath found that loss;
Both find each other, and I lose both twain,
And both for my sake lay on me this cross:
But here's the joy; my friend and I are one;
Sweet flattery! then she loves but me alone



Sidney
sonnet 15

You that do search for every purling spring
Which from the ribs of old Parnassus flows
And every flower, not sweet perhaps, which grows
Near thereabouts, into your poesy wring
Ye that do dictionary's method bring
Into your rimes, running in rattling rows
You that poor Petrarch's long-deceased woes
With new born sighs and denizen'd wit do sing
You take wrong ways; those far-fet helps be such
As do bewray a want of inward touch
And sure, at length, stol'n goods do come to light
But if, both for your love and skill, your name
You seek to nurse at fullest breasts of Fame,
Stella behold, and then being to indite.


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needing
11-23-2005, 08:02 AM
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needing
11-23-2005, 11:58 AM
where are you
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ChuckBukowski
11-23-2005, 12:44 PM
Ill take a crack at Sonnet 33
You must have a report due or something...lol

I believe the author is just referring to his fondness of the sun and the warmth and joy it brings to an otherwise dreary climate (region cloud) and even though he’s a little sad he isn’t mad (Yet him for this my love no whit disdaineth) at the sun for leaving (Stealing unseen to west). He says its Gods will, God trumps the sun and clouds (Suns of the world may stain when heaven's sun staineth)

needing
11-24-2005, 05:08 AM
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11-24-2005, 06:21 AM
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needing
11-24-2005, 12:37 PM
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needing
11-25-2005, 05:13 AM
please my friend help me quickly
please.............................
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needing
11-25-2005, 05:16 AM
my exam is after tomorow
please quickly

B-Mental
11-25-2005, 06:40 AM
Sonnet 34

Why didst thou promise such a beauteous day,
And make me travel forth without my cloak,
To let base clouds o'ertake me in my way,
Hiding thy bravery in their rotten smoke?
'Tis not enough that through the cloud thou break,
To dry the rain on my storm-beaten face,
For no man well of such a salve can speak
That heals the wound and cures not the disgrace:
Nor can thy shame give physic to my grief;
Though thou repent, yet I have still the loss:
The offender's sorrow lends but weak relief
To him that bears the strong offence's cross.
Ah! but those tears are pearl which thy love sheds,
And they are rich and ransom all ill deeds.


The author blames the sun for misleading that the day would be bright and clear. When the storm arrives the author doesn't have his cloak, so even though it was a brief rain shower and the sun returns the authors spirits are dampened. The shining sun is not forgiven for misleading. Finally, the author seems to say that the future shining of the sun will be an accepted apology. Something like that.

Logos
11-25-2005, 09:18 AM
Posts have been deleted.

If you don't have anything nice to say or constructive to add, please don't see it as an opportunity to be mean or borderline flame someone.

B-Mental and ChuckBukowski, you're very kind to help, thank you. It's people like you who make this such a great site :)

jon1jt
11-25-2005, 02:26 PM
TO MODERATOR: I really don't see how providing students a "free" service that at the same time allows them to shirk responsibility --- by literally posting question assignments verbatim complete with full poetry text --- is "making this such a great site." Every fifth or sixth thread consists in somebody crying out for poetry help, as if high school and colleges don't offer extra-help/tutoring centers. Shame on you Mr. Moderator for deleting my reprimands to Needing, in effect, encouraging ever more "homework pleas" and drowning out the healty, poetry discourse. Give me a break with your touchy-feely response to those who were "kind" enough to help him. It's people like Bukowski, et al, who respond to such solicitations primarily because they are challenged by the posted assignment, and their response reveals an integrity for the craft of poetry. There's a difference, Mr. Moderator. At least make that visible after you go deleting my threads on the same.

jon1jt
11-25-2005, 02:39 PM
my exam is after tomorow
please quickly

THIS GUY PRESSES FOR ANSWERS FOR HIS UPCOMING EXAM AND MY THREADS CASTIGATING HIM GET DELETED. OH MY.

Logos
11-25-2005, 02:57 PM
Well jon1jt there is nothing about this site that encourages people to ask for help. It does happen sometimes and it is up to individuals to offer "free" help if they want. I don't condone or condemn and I ask you to do the same.

There is nothing here to suggest that this person is `cheating' or doing something wrong. Or are you saying these exact questions are contained on their exam? if so how do you know that?

If needing is doing something `ethically' wrong then that is between them and their academic advisors to decide.

B-Mental
11-26-2005, 06:02 AM
Jon1jt you also have to remember that many people may have done their homework, and want confirmation of what they have. Some people are studying english as a second language.

needing
11-26-2005, 12:30 PM
Sonnet 34

Why didst thou promise such a beauteous day,
And make me travel forth without my cloak,
To let base clouds o'ertake me in my way,
Hiding thy bravery in their rotten smoke?
'Tis not enough that through the cloud thou break,
To dry the rain on my storm-beaten face,
For no man well of such a salve can speak
That heals the wound and cures not the disgrace:
Nor can thy shame give physic to my grief;
Though thou repent, yet I have still the loss:
The offender's sorrow lends but weak relief
To him that bears the strong offence's cross.
Ah! but those tears are pearl which thy love sheds,
And they are rich and ransom all ill deeds.


The author blames the sun for misleading that the day would be bright and clear. When the storm arrives the author doesn't have his cloak, so even though it was a brief rain shower and the sun returns the authors spirits are dampened. The shining sun is not forgiven for misleading. Finally, the author seems to say that the future shining of the sun will be an accepted apology. Something like that.



جزاك الله الفردوس الاعلى من الجنة
واسال الله ان يفرج عليك كل هم وغم وان يفتح لك ابواب السعادة والفرج
ارجوك اكمل معي فانا بانتظارك
ولك مني الدعاء

needing
11-27-2005, 12:33 PM
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11-28-2005, 07:28 AM
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smilingtearz
11-28-2005, 08:20 AM
http://www.shakespeare-online.com/sonnets/33detail.html
http://www.geocities.com/quaternaryinstitute/sonnetcomment34to45.html
http://www.sirbacon.org/Sonnet/33.html
http://www.shakespeare-online.com/sonnets/35detail.html

I read thru all these links...they might be helpful...read thru once