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MiSaNtHrOpE
10-29-2005, 01:33 PM
For a 1.5 credit course, I had to read a book called The Pact, about three poor African-American kids who beat the odds and become doctors. My assignment was to write a response to it, and this is what I wrote. I hope you find it amusing and dont waste $14.

I have read many books over the summer, from Brave New World to Sybil, and The Pact by Drs. Davis, Jenkins, and Hunt, ranks as the worst book I have read over the summer. Of the 6 books I’ve read between June and September, The Pact ranks as #36. There is no other book so filled from cover to cover with clichés and the authors made poor use of their education.
I read the book from cover to cover, understood everything, and found no relationship between the lives of the authors and mine. Of course I feel sorry that their childhoods were so awful, but the book presents nothing new to the from-rags-to-riches story.
The mother figure, in the poverty-stricken environment, is usually the most supportive, and teachers never want to see their students fail. They are lucky, however, that they found friendships that are so supportive, but then, they wouldn’t write a book if they failed, would they?
On the NY Times Bestseller list, The Pact does not belong. One could, if he decided to venture into the book, ignoring the warnings on the back cover, read perhaps the first three or four chapters, and immediately realize the middle and end of the book quite accurately. Every rags-to-riches story, every competition / heart-lifting book or movie has exactly the same formula, complete with the poverty-stricken hopeless character who discovers he has some talent at something, and realizes his dream to use that talent to get ahead. Throughout the story, the character meets other characters and figures that wish to see him succeed at his goal, and he goes through each obstacle with a victory or perhaps loses one or two before the final showdown. The Pact, obviously, is no different: even before one opens the book, he or she knows what to expect. And yet, we accept this literary garbage as something substantial.
Aside from the cliché-ridden story, what also significantly contributes to my unwavering hatred of The Pact is the poor use of the doctors’ education. Surely in the course of their studies, they must have been taught how to construct intelligent and interesting sentences, sentences that are absent from their 250-page publication. Instead of interesting sentences, the reader must wade through sections such as “Alone in my room, I listened to Tupac. He rapped about the struggle between his old life as a thug and his new one as a rich rapper. I related to his isolation. (210).” Clearly, judging from the amount of education and schooling a doctor must go through for his degree, these three doctors must have been taught how to at least make their book sound good.
This book, The Pact, has no value, literary or otherwise. The story is formulaic and the sentence construction is strikingly dull. I would not recommend this book to any intelligent person, and assigning it to students in an institution of higher learning should be a prosecutable crime.

LightShade
10-31-2005, 05:57 AM
loool, maybe that was your professor's idea of a joke :p or maybe he wanted to test you and see whether you could honestly deal with a bad book or would indiscriminately praise everything the professor indicates as complusory reading, just to get a top mark.

so what mark did you get? :D

MiSaNtHrOpE
10-31-2005, 01:11 PM
I'm handing it in today. I dont think it was her idea of a sick joke. I think she might genuinely love literary garbage like this... :(

MiSaNtHrOpE
10-31-2005, 10:59 PM
My review didnt go over too well. I didnt "review it on the grounds that it was intended" and I got railed for it.

LightShade
11-01-2005, 04:30 AM
sorry to hear that :(
what grounds was she talking about?
like from a certain point of view, the struggle to make a dream come true, that kind of thing? + irrespective of the fact that it's a bad book?

but then again, if she really loves that kind of stories, she'll never accept a negative opinion from a student. :( sad, but true; I really hate that.

MiSaNtHrOpE
11-01-2005, 10:14 AM
That its "inspirational," not literary. Yeah, the book "inspired" me to tear the pages out, shred it, and burn the bits of paper. I was called an "absolutist" because I hated the book. I was supposed to be "inspired" from it, and I was. I was inspired to hate it deeply.

To my professor: A bad book is a bad book, regardless of whether or not I've visited the slums or set goals for myself.

LightShade
11-01-2005, 10:25 AM
I admire your resolution :D

Is that a literature course? If it is, I wholly agree with you. A literature teacher should be very careful what books he/she recommends.
If not, well... I believe a compromise would be alright. I took an English civilisation course at some point and maybe the choices our professor made as to study materials and compulsory reading (and viewing - we also has movies to watch :D ) were not the most fortunate ones as far as the literary/artistic value was concerned... but that was not the point and we didn't go into such analyses. (or maybe just a short mention in the introduction and the conclusion, pointing out it is, however, a bad book :p )

mhampton
11-29-2006, 10:41 PM
If you were born and raised in a suburban area or if you come from a middle to upperclass home, then you may not appreciate the novel. I agree that the book is not appropriate for college-level courses (after all, it is written at the sixth grade level). But as far as it being a story of inspiration, perseverance, determination, and relating to teenagers, it is superb. Not only that, it deals with issues that children from all walks of life face--peer pressure. The authors describe the ravaging effects of negative peer pressure and the rewarding benefits of positive peer pressure. It is an excellent book for teens because they are faced with the very obstacles in life that the three authors of this novel had to overcome, with no regard to race. This fact is illustrated in the introduction when the authors state, "The lives of most impressionable youg people are defined by their friends, whether they are black, white, Hispanic, or Asian; whether they are rich, poor, or middle-class; whether they live in the city, the suburbs, or the country." (3) I am a high school English teacher and have found that students from all walks of life find the story inspiring and interesting. Students in the private schools where only a select number can afford to attend, students in rural areas where nearly everyone is on welfare, and students from middle to upperclass homes all thoroughly enjoyed the novel. Many students made their own pacts and have vowed to hold each other to it.

It is sad to say, but we live in a society that has compromised its values so much that the compromise has coined a new term: The Dumbing Down of America. The lives of todays teens are bombarded with electronical devices. They have the cell phones, MP3 players, ipods, and hand-held gadgets to keep them entertained. Reading, which is my favorite pasttime, is not at the bottom of the list. Sadly, it is not even on the list. So when a teacher gets a teen to read a book that is inspiring to them, she can only be elated.

Not only does the book deal with the relationships of friends, it also deals with race relations, an unresolved issue in America that will probably never be resolved. Yet, this novel does give insight into the reasons some African-Americans feel the way they do towards Caucasions. Additionally, the authors explain why these reasons and feelings are totally wrong and unwarranted. Everytime one of the protagonists tries to justify hating a White person, it is a White person who ends up saving his dream and in turn his life. It is clear that by the end of the novel, a better understanding of the two opposing races has taken place.

As far as knowing what is going to happen in the novel, one must be careful about labeling such a novel as garbage. The Hobbit, written by J.R.R. Tolkien is one of the most widely read books of all time. I read this novel and the sequels twenty-five years ago. Today, the novel has been made into epic motion pictures. The full title of the novel is The Hobbit or There and Back Again Hence, we know that once the hobbit agrees to go on his adventure, he will return home safely. Yet, this knowledge doesn't destroy the anxiety that builds as he undertakes each adventure.

Is the novel garbage? Not at all. Is it appropriate for a college-level course? No, it is not challenging enough. Unless of course the college student is preparing to teach English/Language Arts in grades 6-12. During my senior year of undergrad studies, I had to read fourteen young adult literature novels for one class. Although The Pact wasn't one of them, several novels that I read were quite boring, not my cup of tea, etc. Yet, I wouldn't label any novel as garbage if it has some value to it.