Down in Flames

[Reichenbach]

Down in Flames

Lost,
Alone,
Faraway,
Though you stand beside me.

Sad,
Unknown,
Consumed,
But I will not let you see.

Scared,
Stranded,
Vulnerable,
Feelings welling up inside.

Weak,
Hidden,
Unimportant,
I want to run and hide.

Cold,
Raining,
Forgotten,
My world is going black.

Happy,
Thoughtful,
Everything,
I want the moment back.

Useless,
Nobody,
Unwelcome,
I don’t know why I’m scared,

Empty,
Nothing,
Frozen,
Once upon a time I thought you cared.

[Dailen]

Watch as I comment again.....
Well, OK....watch what it typed while commenting on your poem.

Sounds like you suffer from a nasty case of lost love.
I like when you leave out the sex of the muse, it allows for it
to be applied in either direction, good for the wounded, no matter
the Organs. :)
You may have read my posts and know from that,
I am not in a position to give advice.
But your way of, sexual ambiguity is a good thing.

Could you tell me whats in your Sig. ?

[Reichenbach]

My sig is the last few lines of 'A Study in Scarlet' I don't know the word-for-word translation but it basically means . . . they may mock me but I can laugh as I count my earnings in my well deserved home. In common day language, it means I couldn't care less what people think!

BTW, check out my 'fatal words' poem just to put a really positive spin on things . . . *cough*