The Beast That Is Inspiration

[Dailen]

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[blp]

The first stanza reads really well. After that, you're sometimes forcing it to fit the overall structure and rhyme scheme, particularly in lines like 'You'll not leave my side' and 'Englightens at the Same' when you obviously mean 'the same time'. No need for the cap in 'Same' either. At the end of the next stanza, I think you want 'loose', not 'lose' (loos, not looz).
As far as the subject matter goes, you might find it interesting to read Llorca's essay on Duende - the idea in Spanish culture of a sort of demonic, tormenting muse.

[Dailen]

As far as the subject matter goes, you might find it interesting to read Llorca's essay on Duende - the idea in Spanish culture of a sort of demonic, tormenting muse I did not know that. cool.

Llorca's essay on Duende.

Your very helpfully - Thank you again blp