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spally
10-17-2005, 11:04 AM
no, no let me go. i can't stand this hold no more.
no, no let me go. i can't be here any more.
no, no can't you see this pain that lies inside of me.
no more ach, no more pain, no more time for this again.
please don't yell, please don't fight, i will try and make things right.
no more time it;s running out, and i have not a doubt.
i'll sitting, crying, wondering why my time must seem to die.
no,no let me die. i can't stand this pain tonight.
no, no let me die. i can't seem to stay alive.

Bianca Fransen
10-17-2005, 11:46 AM
Wow, a very moving poem - which makes me hope the writer has not experienced this agony in real life.. but have doubts about this hope at the same time :(