Curiosity

[EmmyB]

Curiosity got you, you went out your way to look,
to see if i had written, about you in my book.
what you found was nothing-good said, about you love,
and now you feel discomfort,my little turtle dove.

it serves you right for snooping, into my personal favourite site,
and hopefully now my chicken, you'll do other things tonight.

this is my favourite interest, its something i like to do, but i have come out to use another pc, to say these words to you.

at home i have no privacy, you're everywhere i look,
i try to find some time for me, so i can start my book.

i am not where you think i am, i have come for what i need,
a place where i can get some peace, alone, so i can read.

its not alot to ask for, a little personal space, but maybe if i had it,it may be a different case.
i love you very deeply, i dont want to ever lose,
you, my dearest sweetheart, i hope you're not confused.

[blp]

I like the anger of it. Very wry and funny and the voice sounds very real. The scansion gets a little lost at the end, along with the anger, both of which losses seem a shame. Grammar breaks down too a bit: 'it might be a different case' would be right.