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brighttears
10-10-2005, 12:55 AM
In a society where I've been robbed from my own uncreated slaughter.
With my filled vessels of vehemence.
Unraveling my aforesaid prenatural obituary.
Putting in maximum strength to reach my minimum.
Working hard to portray my privacy of prison.
Where will i get rid of her without anyone noticing?
Resulting in flames from the ways of my so called insured wind.
I show plent of forbearance for anyone but myself.
My incorrigible pleasing guarantees no longer make sense to me.
I want to become some crazy freak and start ripping everything limb from limb for a period of time.
Then i'll fell so much better.
How can she be so unpolitically opinionated?
Let my skin stay ripped i don't want it to close.


This probably doesn't make much sense, it was written out of anger :flare: so my words kinda just popped out of my mind, like popcorn out of a popcorn machine -- some aren't always fully popped. :goof: :confused:

samercury
10-10-2005, 09:37 PM
So what happened (to get you so worked up I mean)???

IrishCanadian
10-11-2005, 01:09 AM
This has nice illiteration and cacophony to drive home the point. But its a little hard to read. I don't know if i can explain that more --just harsh in style and metre even.

brighttears
10-11-2005, 04:46 PM
life just got me mad, but thats the beauty of words you can use them in the most unique ways to express emotions.