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samercury
10-08-2005, 11:26 AM
I can feel you watching me
In the dark
When I walk
I know you're there

Why are you following me?
I can see it you know
I'm not blind
Leave me alone

Ever since I was little
You were there.
Stop following me
I hate it

Why are you following me?
If you want to say something
Come out and say it
I won't mind

Just give me my life back
Can't you let go of the past
I feel like I've done something wrong
But I haven't.

Sorry if you died because of me
But it was your choice
Please leave me alone
Rest in peace

Just go home

Darlin
10-08-2005, 12:34 PM
A poem that makes you think. Quite an unexpected ending too. I'm curious why they chose to die because of you. Suicide?

brighttears
10-09-2005, 12:20 AM
Nice poem Its interesting, but does it still follow you even though its dead?

samercury
10-09-2005, 10:56 AM
@ Darlin- not suicide. Got angry- walked out and ran into a car

@ brighttears- yep, still following even after death

IrishCanadian
10-11-2005, 12:37 AM
Well untill it (they ? somehting?) got hit by a car, I thought it was your shadow. R.L. Stevenson wrote a poem to the same effect called "My Shadow" childeren's poem but worth checking out. So what is it?