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[AbdoRinbo]

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[den]

Like the sea, love and lovers unrelenting in the mix of flotsam and jetsam, Stern und Drang of emotional lives... tempest and storm, causing extreme upswells and low tides. Lovely imagery here Abdo...

[b]

Hello AbdoRinbo,

It is nice to see that you have also used the metaphore sea (or water) to discribe your lyrical expierences. I myself have done that a lot of times, both in proze, poetry - and a fluent combination of the two - so I was really intrigued when I read your text.

Of course I have used that metaphore differently, or - at least - used the different layers of reality that blablabla in a different way. For instance: I've made my text fluently, as if I was lying on the waves. (The different moods of water are expierences, and so are different sounds, rythms and associations.) Unfortunately, I wrote it in Dutch, so I cannot let you expierence it without translating - thus probably raping - the text.

Nice!
Bart