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EpItApH
10-05-2005, 05:33 AM
Puppets in my closet!


The puppets in my closet come out after twelve.
One by one, they march down from each shelf.

With every creaking sound of the closet door.
Fear caught in my throat like gore.

I peer from under the covers to pore.
As they creep gallantly across the floor.

Little people in tiny boots.
Strings attached to all their roots.

Tap, tap, tap, I hear them move faster.
In spite of the absence of the puppet master.

Soon enough they encircle my bed.
And whisper softly the words of the dead.

Unable to budge, I listen in awe.
The genuine darkness I embrace, so pure, so raw.

The moon fades as morning trails bright.
The puppets revert into the closet, out of sight.


A knock on my door, they came in and said…

“Do you still hear those voices in your head?”.

Dailen
10-05-2005, 09:18 AM
Your creepyness, is so cool. I still have a grin on my face.

Wicked!

EpItApH
10-05-2005, 11:50 AM
LOL... hehehehe... thanXx..

samercury
10-05-2005, 05:56 PM
Me like :D. You know, puppets really do live in everyone's closets- they come out at night and try to freak you out

EpItApH
10-07-2005, 05:14 AM
Oh really.. looks like I'm not the only crazy one here :D

shopaholic
10-10-2005, 05:49 PM
That was so cool :eek: Totally creepy...awesome! Do you have any more????

EpItApH
10-13-2005, 03:29 PM
Yeah i have more :D i think i posted one more poem here before this one.. n check the short stories/general writting section for the story 'The black&white Mime.'... If you liked this then you'll certainly love that one ... :D thnx so much for your comment ... reallyyyy glad you enjoyd my work!

subterranean
10-13-2005, 08:20 PM
I like how the words rhyme...

EpItApH
10-14-2005, 06:01 AM
ummm ok...

chispa
10-19-2005, 11:38 AM
nice poem!!!!

EpItApH
10-20-2005, 11:51 AM
hey thankssss!!!!!!!

samercury
10-21-2005, 08:02 PM
EpItApH, what's the title of the other poem you wrote? I'd love to read it! (I really liked your story) :D

EpItApH
10-24-2005, 11:51 AM
hehe.. well it's > Reminiscence

RollWithEm
10-24-2005, 03:25 PM
Splendidly menacing. I particularly like that they “creep gallantly.” Creeping is not something I’ve ever heard of being done gallantly before now. Interesting idea.

EpItApH
04-28-2006, 04:48 PM
Yes it is! Glad you noticed that. :D
And thank you for your comment.