The Perfect Day

[yellowfeverlime]

Don't think i'm too carzy writing this...



I feel the wind
as it makes its way
i feel the sun
because it's a really hot day
i feel the rain
as it pounds the hard ground
i try to look up
but it forces me back down
i feel the rough ground
under my bare feet
i looked down
and see the raging waves
the blue and gray clashing together
the sharp rocks
creating mini tidal waves
i see a seagull
swiftly move above the water
as it picks up it's dinner in one quick move
i watch the lightning
making it's way to the ground
i hear the thunder
i suddenly turn around
i see my parents,
and their tear streaked faces,
running to wards me with incredible speed
i close my eyes
and start to fall back wards
as i reopen my eyes
i see my mom
on her knees
praying to me or the sun
i hit the rocks
with such great force
the last thing i heard
was my mother's scream
oh... what a perfect day...
for a suicide

Thanks for reading!!! Please Comment Thanks!!!
~Stevie~

[B-Mental]

Stevie, Just so you know suicide won't satisfy. You mention it, what I would call frequently. If you are ever in a blue mood PM me. I've been through some wicked mean depressions.

[yellowfeverlime]

Me too! My parents think i'm insane!~

[B-Mental]

Part of the struggle of creativity is your uniqueness. You obviously have a creative mind. You may want to watch out for strong mood swings though. Usually you can ride them out.

[yellowfeverlime]

Read my link 2 poems and quotes. I'm gonna thread a really disgusting 1
i'll PM it 2 u 1st

[Logos]

Steve

we really don't like to `censor' poetry here, or any other creative works, but, I'm going to ask you to consider getting some support and help with the recent issues you've written and posted about.

Most people are here at this forum for their interest in literature. With the nature of this and other poems you've posted, it's quite possible that you may trigger or upset someone, and we are not equipped or capable of helping you in what may be where you need real life assistance in regards to depression or suicide or self-harm.

There are numbers you or anyone can call if you are feeling upset and need someone to talk to:

United States:

National Suicide Hotline: 1-800-SUICIDE (1-800-784-2433)

Suicide Prevention Hot Line:1-800-827-7571

Canada:

Kid's Help Phone: 1.800.668.6868

a website with many other phone numbers and resources:

http://www.teenadviceonline.org/gethelp/numbers.html

a discussion forum for depression, self-harm and other issues:

http://www.depressionforums.org/cgi-bin/ikonboard/ikonboard.cgi?

[yellowfeverlime]

Want me 2 block this one too????